thesis statement..

miss dia..
could you check my thesis statement..
it is question from past years paper..-oct2007-

the question:
write an essay of 180 words on why malaysian university students are not good in English..

my answer:
Malaysian university student,sounds like a great person,but how could they can be great if they are not good in English.This happen because of various causes that we simply ignore of it.One of the cause why they are not good in English is that they lack of confident.Other than that,they feel shy to talk among themselves.they also less of exposure in English as it can make them think that English is a hard second language to be learn.

'poem specially for my friend'

friend..
knowing u such a great time for me..
the first time we meet..
we laugh together..
cry together..
i know u r the best for me..

friend..
losing u is like my life start to be miserable..
start to be lonely..
start to be 'zero'..

friend..
u r there when i need u..
u r there when i need someone to hear my problem..
u r there when i need someone shoulder to cry to..
u r there when i need someone to share my joy..
everything with u..
n always be with u..

freind..
i hope,we will be friend forever..
and ever..
take of our friendship cos i luv u a lot...

created by..
nana..
p/s..
i just wrote this poem by my own..hopefully it will not be funny..
hehehe..
tq (^_^)

nana da superhero..hahahaha

if i'm a superhero?...it sounds interesting..
the human abilities do i want to have is..i hope that i do power in every subject...i can be 'the master'..i love math..i do love to speak english too...haaa...i can speak any other languange..
it would be easier for me to comunicate with other races..mmm..'races' is bangsa right..ithink so..
other than that..what else?...hmmmmmm...i want..i want..haaa..i think i want the abilities where i can read others minds...what they think....i love to have that abilities...stat dreaming...huuuuuuu...i think that's all for now..dadaaa..(^_^)

the trip and the malaysian idol wannabe

todays activity..wonderful..i like the activity..although we cant prepared well..i hope our presentation can enjoy my classmates..
i'm a little bit shy to talk infront of the clas..but i've tried..
at least i have a little bit confident and can speak loud..
i hope to have more presentation..so it can help my speaking infront of my friend and we can be more close between each other..tq

after several class..

helo miss dia...
after several class...so far...ok for me...
but sometimes a little bit confius or cant understand some topic..
bout the topic sentence..
i cant really follow..
but if i try...
i think i can...
but...a little bit slow...
i need time to fully understand bout the topic sentence...
i think thats all for now...
ok...

attention to Miss Dia

ola miss dia..nur adlina jamil is my name..u can call me nana.i'm taking bisness study and i'm in class jbd1b2.i have 6 siblings,3 gurls and 3 boys.i'm the second one.i live in taman senai utama,kulai..
both of my parents work as a teacher..ok..english subject..i love to learn english and to speak in english..but i'm a little bit poor in my grammar..i hope that miss can help me with my grammar and speaking skills..lastly,i hope my english would be more better and more confident to speak english to others after joining this class.
thank you